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Cinamon 23-05-2002 21:07

I wish
 
I wish I could understand
Your lips are moving
But I can't hear the words
It's like everything's so far away
And i'm not able to reach it
Still, I listen
To little stories
I read them in your mind
See what your eyes say
I'm not able to hear
I read
I listen carefully
Because I know your mind
Has so many stories
To let go
I will listen to them
Trust me, I'll read them
I wish I could understand
Your eyes are speaking
But my mind doesn't get
The pictures that are flying by
I wish I could understand
My mind is talking
Your eyes are listening
I can see the blue
They're telling me
I care for you....

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Eerder een verhaaltje
echt niet uhm superfantastisch ofzow..
maar hmm
kritiek is altijd welkom!

Jesse_For You 24-05-2002 10:36

Nou ik vind hem wel goed ik begrijp hem dus het is duidelijk maar ik neem aan dat dit niet je beste werk is .. maar neem mijn woord er maar niet voor.. :)

Jesse

Cinamon 24-05-2002 14:32

Citaat:

Jesse_For You schreef:
maar ik neem aan dat dit niet je beste werk is

nee,
ik geef toe, heb ook betere gehad ja...
maar ik zit nu in een beetje rare situatie
dan wil ik het wegschrijven en dan komt er zowiets...
nou ja :D
bedankt for je reply!

Sidhe 24-05-2002 15:40

Eej girl,

Wrote yesterday after MSN or what? Is nice... specific person as in neighbour?

Well not important. Took *my* breath away this time, is great! Keep them coming! :D

Cinamon 24-05-2002 16:28

Citaat:

Inge13 schreef:
specific person as in neighbour?


yeah sorta... :D

Citaat:

Took *my* breath away this time, is great! Keep them coming! :D
I will!

thenks girl!
xxx

ps. don't go thinking i'm all over him though,
just starting to move on...


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