Scholieren.com forum

Scholieren.com forum (https://forum.scholieren.com/index.php)
-   Verhalen & Gedichten (https://forum.scholieren.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25)
-   -   if tomorrow never comes (https://forum.scholieren.com/showthread.php?t=105797)

*Norena* 26-05-2002 14:27

if tomorrow never comes
 
if tomorrow never comes
it does'nd matter,i learned a lot so listen
i learned that it take's years to build trust
and a few seconds to distroy it

i learned that to be rich is not to have the most
but to need the least

i learned to forgive
by practising forgiveniss

i learned that i cannot make anyone love me
but learn to let myself be loved

i learned that it take's a few seconds
to hurt people in love
and it take years to heal

i learned tat money can by everything
only happiness

i learned that while at times i may be entiled to be upset
that does not give me the right to upset those around me

i learned that true friends are scare
and when i have found one
i have found a treasure

the key to friendship is not two people relating
but in two hearts communication

life means a lot to me but if tomorrow never comes
i knouw a learned a lot while i was a life

Alice 26-05-2002 15:32

Citaat:

*Norena* schreef:
if tomorrow never comes
it does'nd matter,i learned a lot so listen
i learned that it take's years to build trust
and a few seconds to distroy it

i learned that to be rich is not to have the most
but to need the least

i learned to forgive
by practising forgiveniss

i learned that i cannot make anyone love me
but learn to let myself be loved

i learned that it take's a few seconds
to hurt people in love
and it take years to heal

i learned tat money can by everything
only happiness

i learned that while at times i may be entiled to be upset
that does not give me the right to upset those around me

i learned that true friends are scare
and when i have found one
i have found a treasure

the key to friendship is not two people relating
but in two hearts communication

life means a lot to me but if tomorrow never comes
i knouw a learned a lot while i was a life

Mooi Gedicht!!!!! :)

i learned that it take's a few seconds
to hurt people in love
and it take years to heal

Vooral dit spreekt me heel erg aan. Komt me nogal bekend voor :(

tacidvs 26-05-2002 15:54

*auw*

~Dark Voice~ 26-05-2002 16:05

Citaat:

tacidvs schreef:
*auw*
*auw* zegt inderdaad genoeg op dit moment..

Arenda 26-05-2002 18:48

Citaat:

calista schreef:
De boodschap is inderdaad mooi, maar ook al heel bekend. Al deze zinnen zijn al bestaande losse quotes, die je samen hebt gevoegd... Niet erg origineel
īK ben het hier helaas wel mee eens, de boodschap is idd wel mooi, maar minstens de helf is gequote, en er zitten erg veel spellingfouten in... let ook op hoofdletters enzo (... zeur.. zeur..z eur... sorry :( )

*Norena* 26-05-2002 18:50

Citaat:

sweetsterretje schreef:


īK ben het hier helaas wel mee eens, de boodschap is idd wel mooi, maar minstens de helf is gequote, en er zitten erg veel spellingfouten in... let ook op hoofdletters enzo (... zeur.. zeur..z eur... sorry :( )

geen sorry lieverds , iedereen mag zeggen wat hij er van vindt :)

SounD 27-05-2002 05:24

Gebruik voor I aub hoofdletter
en gooi er een spellingscheck overheen.

entiled=>entiteled
distroy => destroy
forgiveniss => forgiveness
scare => scarce
i knouw a learned a lot while i was a life =>
I know I learned a lot while I was alive

of bedoel je echt ik was een leven ipv levend?

zo zonde wanneer aardige of mooie gedichten vol spelfouten zitten :(


Alle tijden zijn GMT +1. Het is nu 15:47.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.8
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.