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*Fallen Angel* 02-06-2002 20:47

ff iets kwijt
 
hate me hurt me, toutch me with your silver words.
can t heal me anymore, think I like you but than I hate you.
don t know what to think of you anymore.
an hour ago i liked you , and know i hate you,
but tomorrow I think i'll like you again.
toutch me, let me bleed, let silver words flow out of me.......

Gothic 02-06-2002 21:09

misschien de zinnen wat korter maken, ik kan nu het ritme lastig vinden, maakth et gedicht meteen minder, terwijl het misschien best goed is...


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