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..*LR*.. 21-05-2005 19:49

You said....
 
You said I love you,
you meant: I have loved you

you said I'll try,
you meant: it's too late.

You said I'll never let you go,
You meant: soon I'll be gone.

Everything you've said,
I believed

Everytime you lied,
I believed

Everytime you've said,
You're the only one

I should have known,
That you meant:

I love you,
But I love the others to...

CSN 21-05-2005 20:00

You said I love you,
you meant: I have loved you

you said I'll try,
you meant: it's too late.

You said I'll never let you go,
You meant: soon I'll be gone.

Everything you've said,
I believed

Everytime you lied,
I believed (you)

Everytime you've said,
You're the only one

I should have known,
That you've meant:

I love you,
But I love the others too...

Leonoor 21-05-2005 21:52

Niet negatief bedoeld, maar ik zou het in het Nederlands proberen. Ik denk dat je dan een beter gedicht zou krijgen. :) Het gedicht vind ik nu te simpel en er staat (als af mag gaan op de post van CSN) aardig wat foutjes in.


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