gedichtje geschreven voor mijn beste vriendin
 

The girl who's standing beside me
so close, but so far away
I've tryed to get closer to her
but it feels like she's even farther away

The dazed look in her eyes
full of sadness, hurt and pain
I can see the tears in her eyes
but she can't cry anymore

The scars in her skin
everybody can see them
But nobody sees the scars in her heart
wich hurts so much more

I wished to give her life back
so she can go on
So she can open her eyes and see
that life is waiting for her



Nouw, dat was m dan, geef asjeblieft maar je mening,
xxx Bijou

Waarom Engels?

I've tried to get closer to her
but it feels like she's even further away

ik vind het niet erg lekker lopen, en als je vierregelig dicht vind ik rijm toch wel enigzins op zijn plaats.