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HipHopSter 30-06-2002 20:54

my lost love
 
My lost love

You we're the one for me
but i've lost you
how can i live without you?
i miss you

Our love was so full of fire
so pure
with you i was happy
with you i felt compleet

I still feel your lips
your soft worm lips
your hands over my body
god i miss you

Every day without you
is a day in the dark
you we're my light
but it burned out
our love is gone

*Norena* 30-06-2002 22:04

beetje simpel, maar met gevoel :) goed beschreven :)

Amoa 02-07-2002 20:44

Helemaal mee eens.

Gothic 03-07-2002 07:36

Het is me net iets te cliché en iets te weinig orginaliteit


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