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Devotee 30-06-2002 23:14

Goodbye
 
Once upon a time
There was love
Strong and secure
No regrets or sorrow

In one moment in time
Courage went away
The all relation change
It felt completely apart

We go on everyday
As if nothing matters
Pretending we're happy
Going on with life

I can't help feeling
As if a piece is missing
Living with an hole
Knowing you'll never return

Secreet 01-07-2002 06:57

meer een soort van verhaaltje vind ik...goed ritme, aardige strofes, beetje afgezaagd onderwerp en weinig intressante woordkeuzes...


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