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AngelLena 01-07-2002 19:45

My Wings (voor mijn allerliefste vriend)
 
Since the day I met you
You’ve drastically changed my life
When I looked into your eyes
I saw the shape you were in

I wasn’t too good myself I know
But when I saw you
There was nothing I would rather do
Than to take care of you

My protectable wings opened up
You gladly took comfort underneath them
You let me protect your soul
To keep it from getting cold

As the feelings started to grow
My wings closed up around you
They trusted you to be there
They gave you your chance

The chance you’ve been asking for
I gave it to you
And you’ve passed the test
My wings let you in

And they won’t let you go
You’re free to move everywhere you want
As long as you return soon
My wings lose their feathers without you

And right now they miss you
Too much warmth
They can’t give away now
And slowly they will turn cold

So I’ve sent my wings after you
To keep you warm and sheltered
And to protect you, keep you safe
So no harm will come over you

Everywhere you go they’ll be
With every step you take
They’ll fly above you
And only fly aside to let some sunshine through

A spell is cast upon you
Nothing bad will happen
As long as my wings are around you
We are bonded by them

We are as one.

Gothic 02-07-2002 08:17

Hele lieve, warme poging een gedicht voor iemand te schrijven. Het voelt heel diep het gedicht, de vriendschap zal dat ook wel zijn. Sommige stukjes zijn mooi, sommige ietswat cliché, maar al met al mooi gedicht :)...

Ik kan me herinnerren dat je al vaker gedichten voor beste vriend schreef? Klopt dat?


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