My essay is on the article about ... - correcte zin?
 

Is deze zin correct:
My essay is on the article about "The Code" which was in the Vanity Fair.

My essay is about the article "The Code" which was ?published? in the Vanity Fair.

Ik zou dit ervan maken; maar ik weet niet of dat van jou echt 'fout' is.

Dat laatste inderdaad, alleen moet je de 'the' voor 'Vanity Fair' weglaten. Ik zou het zo zeggen:

My essay is about the article "The Code" which was published in Vanity Fair magazine.