my new life
 

the circle of my life is closing
the strength I thought possessed is gone
on days like this my thoughts wirl freely
do summarize what I have done

the walls I built are tumbling down
on parts of me I thought eternal
in ruins of past the new will rise
I re-ascend upon my fall

the road I take is still unknown
with gaps I daren't jump right now
I therefore beg you help me please
will run to you must tell me how

Na aanhoudend commentaar over de kwaliteit van mijn gedichten, deze. Is ietwat beter denk ik.

Hij's mooi :)

Hij is nog niet af mijn inziens