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The door opens slowly and brings in the cold. The hinge on the door creaks trough the silence of which I thought it would last for all eternity. There you are. You stand there, shivering. Looking at you, I can only see the shape of your body, and your skin as white as snow. I walk towards you, and my hand reaches out to touch. The door quickly closes, leaving the cold outside. Your clothes are soaking wet; the world poured it's tears over you. Your eyes look at me, like the eyes of a child that has been hurt, damaged for ever. Oh how I wish I could tell you it is gonna be alright. But I promised not to lie. For so long now, breathing equals loving you.

Words are just the servants of hurt, so this time I won't speak of my love for you. I will not speak of anything, cause right now nothing matters.
I wish I could be a little bit more, than I am now.

Softly my lips touch yours, and your tongue caresses mine in slowmotion. Your hands wander around on my body, get lost in my clothes, and find their way on my naked skin. I kiss my way down, and feel your warmth touching my lips. You gasp into the dark of the room. I gaze up to you. In the dim light of a candle I see you standing, tall and mysterious. My divine creature. Our eyes meet. I see yours, longing for some bliss, and you see mine; longing for the same.

You fill me with just a piece of your passionate self. In our world it's just us, without any pain or doubt. This world just lasts a small minute, before we collapse.

The light of the dawn breaks in trough the window. It's the beginning of just another crooked day. I feel your body, turned cold now. Without knowing, I feel it's over. I can tell your body died. I cry into my pillow, and pray for death to take my hand. 'oh please dear death, you villain, take this to an end.' I crawl into your arms but no more it feels safe. Now breathing equals missing you, I think I really can't.
I welcome a deep sunken sleep.... and wander into the promised land. Our souls will meet again and I will have you close to me. Dead for all eternity.

een woord:

Wauw!!! :eek: :eek:

Dankjewel :)

Ik vind het eind alleen minder mooi als het begin :confused:
achjuah :D

nouw, ikke niet!!

en dan moet je het over een hele tijd nog es teruglezen, misschien dat je dan in ene ziet wat je dan anders wil/kan doen of dat het wel klopt.. dan ben je weer meer objectief omdat ie dan niet meer vers is

*huil*
ik vind het opzich best wel prachtig...
Ik heb dan ook iets met natte lichamen in de deuropening... Als dat element erin zit vind ik het goed. :p

Ik vind het gewoon goed... Ik kan er geen woordjes voor vinden...
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aww dankjewel :D

Mooi beeldend zeg!!, door de woorden, leef je zo mee, ja inhoudelijk (y) weergegeven....einde = goed!

Liefs,
Mariamne

Wow :) mooi kel :)

Wederom is stilte het beste antwoord dat ik je kan geven...

*bleef geboeid*

op alle fronten thumbs up (y)