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Devotee 30-07-2002 12:34

Knowing when it hurts...
 
Sensation comes over me
Familiar but not wanted
I know why it's there
Unsure of the future

I know what you are
Just a band-aid
For the hole in my soul
A temporal solution

You'll leave. I know
I'll adapt, I'm sure
I'll keep the memories
Cherish my new scar

But for now, the sensation
Because I'm weak
Because I care more that I want to
Because you've penetraded my shield

I hate the sensation
It shows I'm vulnerable
I'm not myself these days
My mask has cracked...

Gothic 30-07-2002 14:54

Deels herkenbaar, sterk verwoord, verder niet heel simpel, maar zo'n gedicht had velen malen slechter verwoord kunnen worden...

tacidvs 30-07-2002 14:54

Door omstandigheden kan ik hier niet recht op reageren, mijn excuses. Penetraded? Doorgehandeld??? ;) Sorrie, ben niet erg nuttig vandaag, mooi gedicht, spreekt.


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