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AnTaRTiCa 05-09-2001 11:29

Thoughts
 
Sitting still, staring into space, thinking in my head, what is left for me to face?? I
have gone through it all..All the emotions that people go through.. I sometimes like
to wonder, where has my happiness gone to?? Maybe down the drain, where all my
hopes and dreams washed away..Maybe I never had them, maybe its not meant to
be..Me, ever being able to be happy..Its really hard to think of yourself when others
don't care..All they worry about is themselves, why would I want to be apart of a
society like theirs?? My heart really hurts..and I don't know why..Too many things
happen so its really hard to deny..Deny this pain that taunts me..Deny the tears
that is falling down my face..I try to be strong..As strong as I can be...but that isn't
enough..to keep me happy..Why do I have to be so sensitive?? Why do I have to
feel?? Too many thoughts are going through my head in which I can deal..I don't
know what to do..Maybe there is only one option left for me to chose..That pathway
of darkness, that everyone fears to go through..But if I can escape from my misery
what do I've got to lose??

Dying Bride 05-09-2001 16:32

Laarzzz.... kou van je onthou da! http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

vempire 05-09-2001 19:09

Mooi gedicht Laar je bent een talent http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif XxX vlad

prinsesje 06-09-2001 11:23

als gedicht vind ik em niet echt goed,
de tekst grijpt me daarentegen wel aan, af en toe wat spellingsfoutjes.
Het lijkt op iets wat puur voor jezelf geschreven is, om het een en ander op een rijtje te zetten voor jezelf ofzo
sterkte ermee, probeer in jezelf te blijven geloven hoe onmogelijk dat soms ook lijkt
this too shall pass...
liefs

sterrenmeisje 10-09-2001 13:27

mooi,.. heel mooi.. mooi geschreven..

klein gek geitje 10-09-2001 13:30

ik snap wat je bedoelt

mooie tekst
zet me aan het denken

halve gare 10-09-2001 16:23

krachtige tekst!!!


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