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Christmas 1985
Christmas 1985
Dear God You probably get these sorta letters everyday But I hope you'll take some time To read and think about mine Listen now I don't know how to say it But everyone betrayed me I never wanted that you see But maybe it's not my fault Do you remember back in 1985 You put me here and said goodbye I'll see you around when I die Well I sighed and blamed myself 'cause hey I took the job Saying stop against the mob It really made me tired now God! Being the angel you told me to be Fuck that God now I really see That you just wanted me gone from heaven Well then here's some news for you I quit goodbye find someone else to do Your dirty jobs 'cause I'm tired I fucking quit! Do you remember last year Did you listen did you hear Last year at christmas wished for a little love But got a little hate Oh God you're outta date You gave me hate and hate and then some more How about a little change Before your latest angel faints Or dies God fuck I'm dying! Would ask for love this christmas But nevermind forgot alas You'd only give me hate and that would be A dissapointment, a pity In fact it would be pretty shitty So here's my offer god take it or leave it Either you kill me now Or I die myself and kill you later Hasta la victoria siempre on christmas 1985 ******** Net geschreven..... zijn ze toch nog ergens goed voor, die down-buien... Commentaar zeer gewaardeerd... |
Ik vind dit een fucking goed gedicht! Het loopt lekker, en zo denk ik er ook altijd over. Die down-buien helpen meestal trouwens, om een goed gedicht neer te zetten, en dat is joś zeker gelukt nu! Zeer en zeer heftig, maar ook zeker heeel mooi!
Ga zoo doorrr |
Dit is echt GOED!!!!!
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Thanks jullie.... Moet ik inderdaad vaker doen, iets schrijven als ik down ben, want het lucht echt op enzo...
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Even omhoog hiermee... wil graag nog wat meer meningen van mensen horen....
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