wat is ons doel in het leven?
 

What are our goals in life
School, work, childeren and wife
You know what I mean
There is so much more to be seen

It's like beeing in the jungle
but knowing you're only on safari
For a moment you'll think you live it
But then remember you're still in the same shit

It's like, just when you are watching Friends
You're mama saying; tomorrow school begins
It fits to your perfect illusions
But you wake up and draw your conclusions

Can we find our true key
Or are we destined to be
I know everybody had its thing
But it's not like the Titanic or Lion King

Life is so complex and simple together
The shit I say don't makes it matter
We are all throwing our lifes away
Thinking about what we could have been may

I don't ya'll want to disrespect
but the way we are living makes me regret
Every one is born with a purpose
Find Yours!

Volgens mij word er alleen gereageerd als alles volgens de regels gedicht is. Maar schijt aan de regels en doe wat je wilt doen.

ik vind de betekenis van het gedicht heel mooi...

ben het met vorige eens!
je hebt gelijk, leuk gedicht, eigenlijk wel mooi, vinnut echt een eigen stijl, mooi

thanx http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

Ik heb het heel losjes geschreven, niet diep ofzo, tis gewoon makkelijk te lezen

.....te begrijpen