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Every Time

Walk away.
Walk away from me.
Don't look back.
If you looked back,
you would only see me crying.
Keep walking.
You don't give a shit about me!!
You used me.
I deserved that.
But it still hurts,
EVERY TIME it happens...

is wel duidelijk waar het over gaat..voelde me gebruikt enzo.

Citaat:

NijntjePluis schreef:
last night.

Hey, look at me!
don't be scared.
try to be tough.
you were tough last night.
you kissed me.
you touched me.
now be a man and look at my tears.
don't walk away.
there's nothing you can do about it!
but still I'm weaker without you!
I need you..
Hold me..
your hands will calm me down.
the same hands that turned me on last night.
I feel lonely without you.
everything seems strange.
only fairytales have happy endings.

hmm vind dit niet zo'n sterk gedicht. hierin probeerde ik de afhankelijkheid van mij aan mijn toemalige vriend uit te drukken.. ( beetje vage zinsbouw maar goed)
liefs, nijntje

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