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'I'he Prophet 14-10-2001 16:42

1 van mijn gedichtjes "Twisted Hell"
 
Twisted Hell

I get my bike, and go to school,
trying all the way.
To put on my "I'm happy" face,
and keep it on all day.

I can't let others see,
I'm really very sad.
Because I know that that would make,
my friends feel very bad.

And so I struggle on,
living this living hell.
And I don't think that,
it will ever become well.

But then I pass you in the halls,
you say "Hi!" and then you smile.
It takes but two whole seconds,
but it makes everything worth the while.

Doortjuh 14-10-2001 16:44

hmmz, ik vind het apart.. niet suupermooi maar ook zeker niet slecht!!!!

The one who I am 14-10-2001 18:06

wat een onzettend lief gedichtje!!! vinnum lekker lezen en hijs echt cool!


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