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confused with hate and love

A memory from me how I was back then.
Now I am caught in my own tears.
I feel like a prisoner in my own life.

I know that before I met you it was a lot easier to say goodbye,
but then again I know you all my life.
Eventough you were gone for a couple of years.

Now you apeard again.
Ready to mess up my life.
Ready to mess up my mind.

When you told me you didn’t love me you broke my heart.
Now I feel like a shadow flowing tru life.
I feel like it has no use being here.

I want to go on.
I don’t want to be a shadow flowing tru life.
I don’t want to be a memory.

But I also don’t want to admid you messed up my life and mind.
I’m gonna keep on going in the hope I will feel better soon.
Don’t want to be a prisoner in my own tears anymore.
:(
It’s hard but I can handle it.
Just give me 1 day for my own.
Let me think for a while.

Let me even drown in my tears for a while.
Don’t talk to me, don’t say a word.
Because I know you are gonna hurt me again.

Please let me.
It’s only for 1day.
I know I feel so much better then.

Let me be, let me get over you.
And please tell me why I always fall in love again when I know it’s gonna hurt me!

Citaat:

pantzermench schreef:
A memory from me how I was back then.
Now I am caught in my own tears.
I feel like a prisoner in my own life.

I know that before I met you it was a lot easier to say goodbye,
but then again I know you all my life.
Eventoughthough you were gone for a couple of years.

Now you apeardappeared again.
Ready to mess up my life.
Ready to mess up my mind.

When you told me you didn’t love me you broke my heart.
Now I feel like a shadow flowing truthrough life.
I feel like it has no use being here.

I want to go on.
I don’t want to be a shadow flowing truthrough life.
I don’t want to be a memory.

But I also don’t want to admidadmit you messed up my life and mind.
I’m gonna keep on going in the hope I will feel better soon.
Don’t want to be a prisoner in my own tears anymoreno-more.
:(
It’s hard but I can handle it.
Just give me 1one day for my own.
Let me think for a while.

Let me even drown in my tears for a while.
Don’t talk to me, don’t say a word.
Because I know you are gonna hurt me again.

Please let me.
It’s only for 1pneday.
I know I feel so much better then.

Let me be, let me get over you.
And please tell me why I always fall in love again when I know it’s gonna hurt me!

Redelijk acceptabel gedichtje, maar naast taalfouten zitten er echter ook wat spelfouten in, die heb ik hier van een alternatiefje voorzien, zie maar. De dingen die cursief erbij staan, zijn sugesties, cijfers gebruiken is een beetje ongebruikelijk in gedichten. En natuurlijk, Nederlands is een mooie taal :)

in ieder geval bedankt!

ken jij ook gedichten schrijven.. wil jij mij dan ff helpen??? :)

"ken ik ook gedichten schrijven?" Ehm, zie hier eens ergens rond en vertel wat je er van vindt. Waarmee zou ik kunnen helpen, mits ik kan dichten natuurlijk.