Engelse brief
 

Ik heb voor Engels een brief gemaakt. Maar nou vraag ik me af of alle fouten eruit zijn. Ik heb hem al een paar keer doorgelezen maar niet echt fouten gevonden. Maar die brief moet eigenlijk perfect zijn want ik sta er bagger voor met Engels. Dus moet ik een goed cijfer halen. Zou iemand hem voor mij willen nakijken?


Hier mijn eigen adres

Mr Jose Luis Guerrero
San Lupe 245
Zona Centro C.P.
22320 Praxedis Guadalupe Guerrero
Mexico

2 November 2011

Dear Mr Jose Luis Guerrero

I have read your article at school. I would like to give my opinion about the article.

My name is Peter de Vries, I am a 16 years old boy and I live in Rotterdam, the Netherlands. I have read the article at school about Marisol Valles Grace. I read that she is dismissed. Something that I find particularly is that Marisol took the job as police chief in a violent Mexican border town even if she has a baby. Something else that I find particularly is that relatives take care of her baby.

I think that you can not stay away from your work without a good reason. Especially if you stay longer away from your work you can at least pass a message on to your boss. I think it is right that you dismissed Marisol. Praxedis needs someone who has courage, nerve and someone who is afraid of nothing. Marisol was not such a person. So it was a good choice to dismiss Marisol. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Peter de Vries (handtekening)

Peter de Vries

Graag verbeteringen als die er zijn.
Alvast hartelijk bedankt.

Mr Jose Luis Guerrero
San Lupe 245
Zona Centro C.P.
22320 Praxedis Guadalupe Guerrero
Mexico

2 November 2011

Dear Mr Jose Luis Guerrero

I have read your article at school. I would like to give my opinion about the article.

My name is Peter de Vries, I am an 16 years old boy and I live in Berkel en Rodenrijs, the Netherlands. I have read the article at school about Marisol Valles Grace. I read that she is suspended. Something that I find particularly strange, is that Marisol took the job as police chief in a violent Mexican border town even though she has a baby. Something else that I find weird is that relatives take care of her baby.

I think that you can not stay away from your work without a good reason. Especcially if you stay longer away from your work, you could at least pass a message onto your boss. I think it is right that you suspendedMarisol. Praxedis needs someone who has courage, iron nerves and someone who is afraid of nothing. Marisol was not such a person. So it was a good choice to fire (of alweer suspend) Marisol. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Peter de Vries (handtekening)

Peter de Vries

ik hoop dat dit helpt.

''especially'' moet toch echt gewoon met 1 c hoor.

woopsie daysie!

;)