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Dying Bride 05-11-2001 20:22

Put your hands on me
 
When the darkness falls
And touches your face
When It cries in vain
And you try to fill up the space
That causes the endless pain

That's when I desire you most
Your soft lips touching mine
Your vingertips caressing my skin
Again I tell you it'll be fine
But I know the truth
You're sinking within...


Now again you're far away
Somewhere I can't comfort you
In my mind you dance to my favourite song
Without the misery they'll put you trough
I'm where you belong

Oh how I long for a night together
Close your eyes so you cannot see
All pain and misery fade into night
When I beg you to put your hands on me...


*slecht!!!*


Gwen. 05-11-2001 20:40

Ik vind hem juist heel erg mooi Kel. Nooit slecht bij een gedicht zetten http://forum.scholieren.com/mad.gif. Het laatste couplet vind ik wat minder maar de eerste paar zijn zo mooi, zo vloeiend.

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