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aquafemme 05-11-2001 17:44

You
 
My lies aren't brave,
I know.
I am a bitch,
I know.
But my choices were the right ones.

Don’t blame me,
with saying that I was lying.
Don’t blame me,
for our broken friendship.
You know that there was no change for us.

We had a nice time,
You know.
We told eachother everything,
You know.
But I don’t thought you would be my friend,
because we were so different.

Over is it know,
Sorry for my lying, but I had to do this on 23ste.
Over is it know,
I will keep you in my hart.
Over is it know,
I have lie to you.

Someday you would find a lucky girl, who’s living in your near.
You couldn’t miss hear anymore, like you teddybear.
I wish you all the luck, and don’t hate me.
But I couldn’t blame you, if you do.

aquafemme


White Widow 05-11-2001 19:34

komt me te bekent voor... eng gewoon !

wel erg mooi

xizz joycju

Aeneas 05-11-2001 19:43

ai ai, het engels van dit gedicht is erug beroerd. Try to pronounce the words near and bear. Do you hear that near rymes with hear and not bear. doesn't matter. look, i appreciate your poem, i reconize the problems that you sketch, that touches me and i have (on these topics) a lot of respect for the volume of the poem,

aquafemme 06-11-2001 13:32

Citaat:

Aeneas schreef:
ai ai, het engels van dit gedicht is erug beroerd. Try to pronounce the words near and bear. Do you hear that near rymes with hear and not bear. doesn't matter. look, i appreciate your poem, i reconize the problems that you sketch, that touches me and i have (on these topics) a lot of respect for the volume of the poem,

I know, my english isn't good. But I try....
This was a poem, that I have written very fast....

bedankt voor jullie reactie


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