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AbusedPrincess 18-11-2001 18:15

Afterlife Awakened
 
Scouring the undone unknown, all alone
My heart was lit by sacred prophecies
An obsession haunts trough my infidel soul
A pre-natural void after gruesome iniquities
Morpheus's crescendo in tyrannical dimensions
At the spring of Hades's reflecting river
His alabaster eyes stared into draining darkness
Shalt thee find what thou seekst?

Our self-centred hatred to a zenith yet to come
Sleep tightly my prince and embrace velvet aeon
Damnation, eternity and saviours quietly throng
They are the chords in this puritanical song

Travelling on infernal roads to pillaged castles
His gilded star shining between the constellations
The baying of wolfs resounds though the frozen forest
And my writhed fingers touched his jewelled hands
We wondered what was beyond anaesthetic Death
Under an enthralling sky we descended
We embraced the waxing of moons in fervour
Whilst we swept cosmic ways and our fate rendered


Vigilant Angels dwell in Arcane Heavens
In tragic whimpers I now awake
In repugnant melancholy I merely realised:
The darkest Seraphs took my disconsolate fate

My fear of scythe
A tear so bliss
His eyes so warm
A heart I cannot harm

Our self-centred hatred to a zenith yet to come
Sleep tightly my prince and embrace velvet aeon
Damnation, eternity and saviours quietly throng
They are the chords in this puritanical song

A precious story yet undone
Peering through cosmic mirrors
Another phantasmal tragedy
Another tale of expelled horrors
Our Romance a fallen Star
One last kiss sealed our farewell
Bursting into wretched tears
Because he would not join me to Hell


I sauntered over paved roads
Alone, without my cherubic counterpart
With a raging desire
To meet him again...

Picturesque Emotions
In a mind
My soul
An emotional Artist

en dit was weer een mislukte actie van Cath!



[Dit bericht is aangepast door bLaCkAnGeL (18-11-2001).]

Ulfheðin 18-11-2001 19:16

echt goed, lief http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

volgende keer iets kortere zinnen proberen te maken mischien, word die iets ritmischer van... maar de smaak heb je echt te pakken http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

AbusedPrincess 18-11-2001 19:17

dankjewel http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif maar..ja :\ http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif lamaar

Ulfheðin 19-11-2001 14:27

hey, kvinnem toch goed http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

niej zeuren http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif

koppie op, ik vin het echt knap

*is jaloers op vocabulaire* http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif

AbusedPrincess 19-11-2001 17:35

http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif *bloos* http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif dankiej lief..

~Black~Angel~ 19-11-2001 18:04

ik vinnum keigoed, alleen moet stiekum wel zeggen dat ik het wel mee eens ben dat de zinnen misschien iets korter moeten http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif Kus, Marchje

AbusedPrincess 19-11-2001 18:26

ik ga um es proberen aan te passen..resultaat zien jullie nog http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

khou van jullieej..

Dying Bride 19-11-2001 19:48

Hijs moowj http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

Shackles 19-11-2001 19:52

Picturesque Emotions
In a mind
My soul
An emotional Artist


Wauw.. Ik vind het echt heel mooi. En die zinnen.. Ze zijn zo goed denk ik hoor. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

AbusedPrincess 20-11-2001 10:49

dankjullie wel http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif whehe krijg het er helemaal warm van http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif


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