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Afterlife Awakened
Scouring the undone unknown, all alone
My heart was lit by sacred prophecies An obsession haunts trough my infidel soul A pre-natural void after gruesome iniquities Morpheus's crescendo in tyrannical dimensions At the spring of Hades's reflecting river His alabaster eyes stared into draining darkness Shalt thee find what thou seekst? Our self-centred hatred to a zenith yet to come Sleep tightly my prince and embrace velvet aeon Damnation, eternity and saviours quietly throng They are the chords in this puritanical song Travelling on infernal roads to pillaged castles His gilded star shining between the constellations The baying of wolfs resounds though the frozen forest And my writhed fingers touched his jewelled hands We wondered what was beyond anaesthetic Death Under an enthralling sky we descended We embraced the waxing of moons in fervour Whilst we swept cosmic ways and our fate rendered Vigilant Angels dwell in Arcane Heavens In tragic whimpers I now awake In repugnant melancholy I merely realised: The darkest Seraphs took my disconsolate fate My fear of scythe A tear so bliss His eyes so warm A heart I cannot harm Our self-centred hatred to a zenith yet to come Sleep tightly my prince and embrace velvet aeon Damnation, eternity and saviours quietly throng They are the chords in this puritanical song A precious story yet undone Peering through cosmic mirrors Another phantasmal tragedy Another tale of expelled horrors Our Romance a fallen Star One last kiss sealed our farewell Bursting into wretched tears Because he would not join me to Hell I sauntered over paved roads Alone, without my cherubic counterpart With a raging desire To meet him again... Picturesque Emotions In a mind My soul An emotional Artist en dit was weer een mislukte actie van Cath! [Dit bericht is aangepast door bLaCkAnGeL (18-11-2001).] |
echt goed, lief http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
volgende keer iets kortere zinnen proberen te maken mischien, word die iets ritmischer van... maar de smaak heb je echt te pakken http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif |
dankjewel http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif maar..ja :\ http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif lamaar
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hey, kvinnem toch goed http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
niej zeuren http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif koppie op, ik vin het echt knap *is jaloers op vocabulaire* http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif |
http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif *bloos* http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif dankiej lief..
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ik vinnum keigoed, alleen moet stiekum wel zeggen dat ik het wel mee eens ben dat de zinnen misschien iets korter moeten http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif Kus, Marchje
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ik ga um es proberen aan te passen..resultaat zien jullie nog http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
khou van jullieej.. |
Hijs moowj http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
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Picturesque Emotions
In a mind My soul An emotional Artist Wauw.. Ik vind het echt heel mooi. En die zinnen.. Ze zijn zo goed denk ik hoor. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif |
dankjullie wel http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif whehe krijg het er helemaal warm van http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif
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