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AnTaRTiCa 27-11-2001 11:26

Her Profession..
 
Her Profession

She ran away from home when she was just fourteen
cause all those hours under the shower still couldn't make her feel clean
She wanted to be a model, yeah she had a dream
but in between of course she had to make that green

Just an ordinary whore
like all the rest
Dying young
and living fast
and what for?

She couldn't face the facts when life's just a drag
so she turned out taking drugs like smack
Try staying strong when your life is gone to heck
She got lost on a dead-end track

Just an ordinairy whore
like any other
Just sinking away
in the gutter
that was the floor

So she worked her body like it was a machine
Such an easy job if you already have low self-esteem
And in the meantime she was getting more and more lean
but customers just took her for what she seemed

Just an ordinary whore
like all the rest
Doing the worst
but still trying her best
to score

Years later when she came back home as a nervous wreck
Her whole entire family showed her no respect
But just a fragment before daddy's heart-attack
she asked her innocense back

Just an ordinary whore
like any other
Addicted to drugs
and abused by her father
and a few people more...

Genesis 27-11-2001 12:48

JAAAAA geweldig! WAT een verhaal zeg.. echt mooi.. Heb je je weer op uitgeleefd zeg!

MOOI!

Genesis

AnTaRTiCa 27-11-2001 15:55

Citaat:

Genesis schreef:
JAAAAA geweldig! WAT een verhaal zeg.. echt mooi.. Heb je je weer op uitgeleefd zeg!

MOOI!

Genesis

thnxxxxxxxx http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

ik beloof u da ik is vakah met u ga praten ik zie u altijd als ik weg moet http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

vempire 27-11-2001 20:21

Citaat:

Genesis schreef:
JAAAAA geweldig! WAT een verhaal zeg.. echt mooi.. Heb je je weer op uitgeleefd zeg!

MOOI!

Genesis


het is wel te raden dat je een gast ben


Angelleyes 27-11-2001 20:24

Heftig, realistisch, en nog goed qua opbouw ook. Mooi kan ik het niet noemen maar weel heel goed en pakkend!!!!

xxx

Dying Bride 27-11-2001 20:28

mooi laartje http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

misspretty 27-11-2001 22:31

zeer mooi ,maar ook de pijnlijke waarheid http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif


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