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AnTaRTiCa 04-12-2001 21:12

The Pain...
 


The pain

She takes off her coat
and drops it on the stairs
It's old and dirty
but she doesn't care
She walks to her favourite room
Lies down on the bed
She closes her eyes
Got an ache in her head
She takes out the needle
and sticks it into her vein
Just a little something
to take away the pain

And she hates the pain
And she loves the pain
And she feels the pain
and it never goes away...

He takes off his coat
and drops it on a chair
He looks through the room
Can't see her anywhere
He knows that she's sick
but he has the cure
He walks to the bedroom
That's where he finds her
The needle still sticks in her vein
The pain had finally left
because she just had
the last trip she'll ever had

And he feels her pain
And he feels his pain
And he feels the pain
and he wonders who's to blame...

halve gare 05-12-2001 10:09

echt mooi verwoord!!



misspretty 05-12-2001 13:56

deze vindt ik heel gaaf en heel mooi
hoe het verhaal compleet is en in prachtig dichtjasje is gestoken
echt top

Make Yourself 05-12-2001 14:10

sow hijs echt super mooj http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif heel goe verwoord ensow

Dying Bride 05-12-2001 20:41

prachig laar, ik krijg er een mooi beeld van in mijn hoofd... http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif
prachtig meis....


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