Drowned World (nog niet af)
 

A drowned world as one with its sins
Both persuasive and full of sorrow
However, drowning - its own ocean of truth
Never fits in the pool of a human mind

A kindred soul, forlorn for life
Happier eyes as he appears
But grieving as he passes away
Crying, for a love that would not stay

A destructive force, desperate
As his trusted one betrayed him
He haunted her, until both were gone
Obviously, violence sells

Love

UP

Love

begin is goed, ben benieuwd hoe die afloopt

xxx

Danke. Ik was van plan iets met het water te doen, om dat elke keer terug te laten komen. Ik zal eens kijken...

Love

NIEUWSTE VERSIE:

A drowned world as one with its sins
Both persuasive and full of sorrow
However, drowning - its own ocean of truth
Never fits in the pool of a human mind

A kindred soul, forlorn for life
Happier eyes as he appears
But grieving as he passes away
Crying, for a love that would not stay

A destructive force, desperate
As his trusted one betrayed him
He haunted her, until they both
Saw desiccated blood

This stream of life, caught in the bowl of the gods
To use it again, for fresh victims

Love

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