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kaleidoscope 11-12-2001 12:26

Losing a piece of my soul,losing...you
 
Losing a piece of my soul,losing...you

I came to you the hour I was in pain
Looking for answers, I cried to you in vain.
I showed the blood dripping from my heart,
I knew then you'd be my friend,
I knew it from the start.
Blood ran like rivers, flowing through my life,
Even though you hated me for that,you helped me through my strife.

When home wasn't home to me no more,
You opened up your heart, and opened up the door.
We cried into night until the early morn.
We solaced each other's pain and shared our many thorns.

As time flew, the air grew thick,
I saw our friendship fading, and my heart grew sick.
The day had arrived,
When it was time to say goodbye.
Now I sit alone,
reminiscing the past I'd blown.

Maybe you were right,Maybe I did bleed for attention...attention I had al along...

Gwen. 11-12-2001 17:38

Prachtig meis http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

prinsesje 11-12-2001 17:41

Dees is echt heeeeeeeeeeeel erg mooi
echt wow, zo goed, zouden meer mensen moeten lezen, en dat bedoel ik in alle opzichten!
wow echt mooi...

AnTaRTiCa 11-12-2001 18:06

wow vet mooi gedicht mooi meid...

Black_Blasphemy 11-12-2001 18:14

errug mooi.. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

kaleidoscope 11-12-2001 18:48

http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gifdank je wel http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif


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