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kaas187 09-01-2002 20:54

once more
 
The ceiling comes in sight
my eyelids sliding upward
blinding sunlight waking me
another day has come
the time to suffer is there.

I fight to take the first steps
once more the flight to boredom
pushing my self to fo an unknown cause
breathing for a simple reason
everybody does it.

Opinions and ideas pass by
steady and in short periods
only a couple minutes of rest
then the next obligation begins
another lesson.

Suddenly it's all over
the ceiling once more there
my eyelids slowly closing
peace returning.


flurry 09-01-2002 21:06

cool gedicht,

het gevoel zuigt, kennik wel een beetje..
ben vrolijk, maak lol en blijf vaag.

gegroet,
Flur

OsoNke 09-01-2002 21:23

mooi gedicht... ken het gevoel wel..:S is kut..
zoals flops al zei, maak lol en blijf vaag..

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