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Gwen. 16-11-2001 15:34

Voor mijn liefie
 
You don't have to pay
You don't have to bleed
For the mistakes you've made
You make
Just learn
Learn little girl
Learn you are not alone
You ignore that you are beloved
You even try to ignore me
Afraid feelings of guilt
Will tear apart the last pieces
Of your heart
The last pieces you've got
Before the knife reaches it's goal
But learn
Learn little girl

A tear should be transparant
A bloodred drip is not a tear
It's a reflectioon of pain in it's purest form

Stay




Dying Bride 16-11-2001 15:40

wow gwen... echt bjoetieful!

Gwen. 16-11-2001 15:52

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Dying Bride schreef:
wow gwen... echt bjoetieful!
Thanks http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif


Shackles 16-11-2001 16:07

Wauw.. Zo mooi geschreven.. STERKTE

tampaszta 16-11-2001 17:14

Mooi geschreven. Heel lief, heel warm. Hopen dat diegene het wil en kan ontvangen.

kaleidoscope 16-11-2001 17:14

Dear friend,

I'm writing you this letter, friend,
before I go away. But first,
a little thank you, I'd like to send your way.
you have seen my ups and downs,
you have helped me through my frowns.
What a friend I found in you because
what you say is always true.
But now I know, it's not enough,
for, I am far too weak.
I realized if just after, a tear ran down my cheek.

So, friend, please don't hate me.
I wish that you could see.
You asked me how I was today...
Peachy, was what i decided to say.
I realize now I shouldn't have lied,
I should have told you, I'm thinking of suicide.
I know it's weak...but the strenght of fighting is what I've lost.
Please, my friend, try and see,
this is the way it has to be.
I couldn't find a way to stay,
so I just had to get away.
I love you,I'll always do...

So remember when someday...Maybe tomorrow maybe today,When you can't see me and when it looks like I'm away.
Just look up and I'll be there watching over you making sure you're ok.

AnTaRTiCa 16-11-2001 17:18

wow allebei de gedichten zijn onwijs mooi maar heel triestig http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

drama 16-11-2001 18:46


punkrock-bastard 16-11-2001 21:08

Wow... prachtig maartje!

the exploding boy 17-11-2001 00:08

http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif maartje heeel mooi http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif


Gwen. 17-11-2001 20:24

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kaleidoscope 18-11-2001 18:50

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I lof joe!!!!!!!!!

kaleidoscope 10-01-2002 11:44

wow...ik zat net oude gedichten door te spitten,toen las ik deze 2...ik schrok http://forum.scholieren.com/eek.gif

kaleidoscope 10-01-2002 12:29

Dear friend,
I'm writing you this letter, friend,
cause I'm gonna stay,
a little thank you, I'd like to send your way.
you have seen my ups and downs,
you have helped me through my frowns.
What a friend I found in you,because
what you say is always true.
When I was covered with pain and sadness you were there to hold my hand,But my eyes were blinded from pain thats why I pushed it away.
I tried to hid my feelings,but you saw trough that and knew I was weak.
I'm filled with happyness for being your friend..You've saved my life in every way,You gave me the reasons to stay.
I realized if just after, a tear ran down my cheek.

So, friend, please don't hate me.
For the things I did and said.
Now when you ask me how I was today...
'It's hard But I'm still fighting'is what I will say...
I realize now suicide isn't the way,an excuse to go away.
What I didn't saw then is what I can see now...Suicide is weak.
There's no more knife cutting true my vains,It's the strength of fighting that remains.

I love you,I'll always do.



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