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kaleidoscope 10-01-2002 14:02

Mistake..
 
Mistake

I must admit that I have often thought
of leaving it all behind and letting everything go

I was lost and alone, as I always am,
So many people around me,
Yet no one seems to care.

They say they understand and love me very much,
But just when I Trust to love, they forget and move on.

I held the knife so close
as tears, mixed with blood,
Began to fall slowly.
Like a foolish child I cried.

Knowing that I could end it all now
made my mind draw a blank.

I put the knife away and tried to wipe the blood,
that ran faster than I can describe.

I knew suicide wasn't the answer I was looking for.
I knew there was a reason for me being alone.

So many bad things happening at once -
They can make you forget
About the good qualities of life.

Even though life is hard,
and trouble an inevitable part of it.

If you decide to leave it all behind,
maybe you will,
but I can guarantee that others
....Your Mistake will haunt

NUFAN 10-01-2002 15:34

wieieejjjj zussss, hijs echt supermoowj en superherkenbaar oowk..=S maar aaj lof joe en aaj understend joe en en ik = er altijdd voor joooouwwwww!!! http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif *knuff*

kaleidoscope 10-01-2002 17:22

Citaat:

NUFAN schreef:
wieieejjjj zussss, hijs echt supermoowj en superherkenbaar oowk..=S maar aaj lof joe en aaj understend joe en en ik = er altijdd voor joooouwwwww!!! http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif *knuff*


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*Frozen Tears* 10-01-2002 19:06

ik heb 20 minuten net sow gedichtje geschreven dus het is echt heeeeeel herkenbaar voor me (jammer genoeg)
*doewt hele lieve troost knuvv geev*

Dy|_uCK 10-01-2002 19:11

wat een mooie.. KOEL einde

en hij staat in FEL contrast tot wat je eerder schreef

zeer tot zwaar koel!

misspretty 10-01-2002 20:51

ik vindt hem prachtig gewoon
alleen het gevoel http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif
maar het gedicht is perfect ,de verpakking is met echte waarde gemaakt
mooi
xxx
sylvana

skate-angel 10-01-2002 21:15

mooi en sommige delen zijn egt heel erg herkenbaar http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

I was lost and alone, as I always am,
So many people around me,
Yet no one seems to care.

They say they understand and love me very much,
But just when I Trust to love, they forget and move on.

)

*hugggiej*

kaleidoscope 11-01-2002 16:55

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