eerste gedicht, wees niet te streng ;)
 

A game you really enjoy


These words are nothing but a mirror
of the blackness in my soul
My eyes say nothing but this question:
could you make me whole?

Have I just woke up out of a dream
Or am I still living in a nightmare?

I am deaf, still I hear you laughing
I am blind, still I look into your eyes
My heart is lonely and oh so cold,
still you can melt the ice inside..

You have played your game,
tell me, did you have fun?
You played russian roulette with my heart,
But with all eight bullits in your gun

Why didn't you kill hope with a knife
The feeling would be better
With adrenaline floating through my viens
I could have lived the last seconds of my life

But you have destroyd it, with disgrace
you saw right through me, you knew my weakness
You took me high, above the sky
And treated me like a princess

But you were a vampire, for my love
You took advantage, I gave you enough
I was your vampire goddess, I still adore you
But all you wanted was to play, I know it's true

I fell down again, you took away my wings
You fell asleep, in your black cirkle rings
When will you need my affection again?

I am still down on my knees,
Still looking up to your power within
Will I drink from your blood again?

Just say yes, or just say no.
Do Not cause a war inside my head
please, don't play any more games
Just make true love to me instead

I'll still be your angel
I'll catch you when you fall
When it stops freezing in you heart
I will not let you fall at all

Your my dark creature
You might be my biggest mistake
To fall in love, when you don't send it back
But I can tell, my love isn't fake

Let me be your princess,
you will be my king
Oh, I will never leave you
For you I'll dance and sing...

I give you my heart, don't break it
I give you my soul, dont throw it away
I give you my hand, don't make me fall
This moment I am in your mind,
My love, please let me stay...

Forever..
I adore you...

[Dit bericht is aangepast door Princess Vampiria (03-01-2002).]

[Dit bericht is aangepast door Princess Vampiria (06-01-2002).]

gaaaaaf! veeeeeeelveeeeeeel beter dan mijn eerste gedicht!

echt prachtig princess vampiria!!
Ik heb deze gevoelens ook..en jij hebt ze perfect uitgedrukt, ik zou het niet beter kunnen :)

-xXx-
enigma

heeeeel moowjuhg http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
moowje naam ook trouwens

Hey dankjewel jullie!!!
En mijn naam heb ik een beetje gejat van Moonspell... maar mondje dicht he? http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif

Ik hoop er snel weer eentje uit te mogen gooien maar de inspiratie wil niet echt komen :S

kizzy

wouw!!!!1 pr8tig, jij hebt echt talent als dit je 1e gedichie is!

kuzzie caatje

ja dankje!! Ennuh, zoveel talent heb ik echt niet. Niet doorvertellen hoor, maar ik kom hier al heel lang http://forum.scholieren.com/redface.gif

Mooi als gedicht maar ik denk dat het een nog betere songtekst zou zijn... echt iets voor op muziek! http://forum.scholieren.com/icons/icon14.gif

CEEEWWWWWWWWL
moonspell rulet gewoon..

jouw naam ook


your my desire enzow ..beetje van het nummer..
http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif fantastisch....

echt cewl gedicht...

XxX

1 woord: WOW!!!!!

jeetje...na zo'n lange tijd opeens weer een reactie... das pas WOW. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
thnx