The cave has the answer...
 

I open my eyes and I’m confused,
I was just sleeping until the sea woke me up,
I don’t know where I am and why I’m here,
Being somewhere I don’t know was my greatest fear.

As I’m standing up I watch the beautiful sky,
The sand is burning under my feet,
I'm trying to find out where the music is coming from,
Then I hear a voice begging me to come.

It’s a real pretty girl, but her eyes are filled with tears,
She’s screaming, crying, that she’s hurt,
She’s trying to go inside the cave, but she’s too afraid,
But she knows she has to go in, she can not wait.

I take a look in the cave for myself, but I don’t like what I see,
The cave is filled with pain, and I know it’s too much for the girl,
She is hurt so much already, but she’s confinced she has to go inside,
She wants to feel again, she won’t allow herself to hide.

I want to hold her hand, but I know she has to do it herself,
No one can help her accept the pain, especially not the one who created it,
And I know it was my fault, but I do not want to see it yet,
The girl knows I don’t want to she it until it’s too late,
And I think that’s the thing that get’s the girl so upset.


[Dit bericht is aangepast door Gothic (02-02-2002).]

Het loopt nog niet helemaal en zitten nog paar fouten in zie ik net (haal ik er nog uit). Tis ook lekker onduidelijk, en er is op dit moment misschien 1 iemand die het kan snappen...

De rest kijkt maar wat ze ervan vinden http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif

Proud to be her.. (f)

Zoals je zelf al zei loopt het hier en daar niet helemaal goed, maar ondanks dat vind ik het echt heel mooi en goed geschreven. Echt knap. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

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