2 gedichtjes... pls, belangrijk!!
 

willen jullie pls es zeggen wat jullie ervan vinden? 'k heb et in een "dichtbui" geschreven, in een paar minuutjes eigenlijk, maar 'k vind ze best wel geslaagd... jullie mening?? (=> 'k zou graag weten of je ze ook goed genoeg vind voor huistaak engels?)


Yesterday

I don’t know what to do…
Yesterday was such a nice day,
But today it seems it was a big joke.
Why do you love that other girl?
It’s not that I love you in the way she loves you,
I’m just pretty jealous,
Even you’re not my boyfriend or something…
Don’t you have it,
That you love someone as a friend,
But every time that person is talking about her boyfriend,
That you wish you didn’t love her?
‘cause that’s the way I feel about you…

I just wish today that there was no yesterday…




I’m sitting here,
Trying to write a poem.
I want to write a poem,
About my true feelings,
but it seems so hard…
How do I have to explain to you,
That I feel so worse,
So worse I could kill myself…
I wish I didn’t had to go trough this,
but I guess I have no chose…
I hope you never stop believing,
‘cause if you stop,
I think I will not survive this…
It’s too hard to show what’s inside,
too hard to let you know the truth.
I try to out all my frustrations,
but I just do it the wrong way.
Why are some people so rude to me,
why they look at me so strange?
They don’t seem to believe a word I say…
It’s just not fear!!
I don’t deserve this, I know.
I’m to good to let this happen.
Pls, I really need you at the moment,
So, I hope you see the truth, even if I don’t say a word…

ik vind dat er een paar woorden niet helemaal "passen" in het eerste gedicht! daardoor lijkt het in het begtin meer een stukje tekst dan ene gedicht. maar ja dat is mijn mening .....

wel mooi gedich :)