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AnTaRTiCa 13-02-2002 13:21

Docter
 

You are the one
I though could save my life
You are the one
I run to when afraid
You are the doctor
Who can cure my chest pain
You say laughters the best medicine
And give me fatal doses
You are a surgeon
With precise accurcy
You carve ever so slowly
Out my heart
The object of my pain
You smile sadly
At it's dripping hell
You crush it up
Saying what the hell
Didn't you learn anything I taught you?
Never trust in someone
Never give over something so precious
Especially to me
This is a worthless gift though
It is pathetic you have nothing else
I'm sorry I can't help you anymore
Now get the hell out
A gaping wound
Visual to even the blind
Hope poors over the floor
Trailing my footsteps out
You were my last chance
I can see the truth now
I can see what is inside me now
Thanks to this hole
I'm empty
And completely worthless as well
Doctor doctor
Was my call
You shut the door
And started laughing out loud
Laughter is the best medicine
A sadistic chuckle escapes me
Doctor's know best...

Angelleyes 13-02-2002 14:46

Het loopt niet overal even goed, en een paar kleine tikfoutjes (te snel getypt?) maar de inhoud is weer zo geweldig goed en gevoelig neergezet.... prachtig....
xxx

AnTaRTiCa 13-02-2002 16:04

Citaat:

Angelleyes schreef:
Het loopt niet overal even goed, en een paar kleine tikfoutjes (te snel getypt?) maar de inhoud is weer zo geweldig goed en gevoelig neergezet.... prachtig....
xxx

ja ik zie het ja hm najah :S


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