Your stereotypes don’t fit
 

She’s a goddess, beautiful and heavenly
But what does she know?

We live our lives
With the greatest goal:
To impress
Love, I won’t leave you if you don’t know
This writer
Or this film
And I won’t kill you
If you dislike this Perfect Movie
Which, by the way, didn’t win any Awards
But that’s logical, the Award-winning are the commercial ones
And we wouldn’t want that to reach our fragile brain
Which only can take material of the highest standards
And not the Disney stuff that you guys watch, it would kill us, having to watch even one minute of that so-called “ground-breaking” show.

Now would you
Hate one other by the sight of a pretty face,
Thinking that there is no brain inside,
Feeling there is one…
But you won’t admit that your stereotypes aren’t always what you want them to be
Your stereotypes don’t fit in her being
And in her being attractive.

My friend, it was swell
But if you hate the things that the critics like
Or worse, the other way around
I’m sorry, I can’t talk to a person so simple and so plain
My intellect is way too big for you to understand, my love
Let’s make no promises we can’t keep
Because I won’t change my mind
And you won’t ever comprehend.

Love, I won’t leave you
If you don’t know this writer, producer, singer or painter
I just ask you to love me
In this hateful world.

-.-Love

de gedachte erachter is goed...
maar volgende keer probeer eens wat meer ritme eraan te geven

gewoon doorgaan
word steeds beter als je dat doet
(spreek uit ervaring)

Ik heb ook totaal niet op ritme gelet, deze keer. Bedankt http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

Love

Ritme is zo verschrikkelijk belangrijk omdat gedichten bedoeld zijn om voorgedragen te worden, ik lees ze ook altijd op hier...

En de gedachte is goed, ik erger me ook kapot aan 'dat soort mensen' http://forum.scholieren.com/biggrin.gif *zelfspot* http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif

http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

Love

vooral dit stukje vind ik mooi http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif