You are my woman
 

Wandering through the grass
The moon is rising high
I heard a painfull rumor last night

They're trying to take you away from me
But I won't let them do it
You are my woman forever
The sun will rise, the moon will fall
But my love for you will be everlasting

The people always told me:
"You're a fool for loving her...
One day she'll betray you and leave you bleeding on the floor"
But I don't care about them... You only matter
They want to take you, break me, close me into that dark corner again

They're trying to take you away from me
But I won't let them do it
You are my woman forever
The sun will rise, the moon will fall
But my love for you will be everlasting

Last night I faced my best friend
he yelled at me, screamed to me:
"You may love her, but she's no good!!
She wants to take you, break you, rob you, she doesn't love you!!"
But I don't care
I don't give a shit about all those people
I thought to myself: because of him, I might leave you
So I stabbed him to death, put his heart on a stick
Because you are my woman forever, and all negative poles must be eliminated

They're trying to take you away from me
But I won't let them do it
You are my woman forever
The sun will rise, the moon will fall
But my love for you will be everlasting

Today I came home
but found an empty house
You were gone, gone without a note
After hours of looking I saw a message at the door
"....I cannot love you anymore, you are obsessed by me... Therefore I must leave you... Farewell, my love"

They took you away from me
But I will not let you leave me!!
The sun will burn, the moon will crumble and break into pieces
But I will get you back
You are my woman forever
You will not go to other men
You are my woman
My woman...

[Dit bericht is aangepast door Rufus Lee (25-02-2002).]

*traantje weg pink*

awwwwwwwww.....:S http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif wat moet ik hier van vinden....heel mooi *huil snik lach enzo*

Thanx http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

het is zo ongeveer m'n 1e engelse gedicht http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

*is er best trots op http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif*

mag er wel trots op zijn, doet het goed bij mij

Stoer http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

vind hem ook wel goed, had er in het begin wat moeite mee, maar eindigt mooi!
ook het begin natuurlijk http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
goed gedaan! vooral voor 1e Engelse gedicht http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
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*volgeling van Gandhi* -=wie hoort mijn tranen?=-~12~De wereld is overheerst door nee...~Vriendschap!~-=^Kelly^=liefs voor vrienden!~love you~

[Dit bericht is aangepast door Christel (26-02-2002).]

wouw, echt mooi en sterk verhaal..!! staat alleen 1 grammaticaal foutje in... het is zeg maar to be obsessed with, ipv by.. maar dat stoort niet heel erg hoor http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif nee, echt mooi, wel schokkend!! haha
kusss

Give way...thats my woman...
[quote uit: Ayashi no ceres]

Tsja, ik moet zeggen dat je het met de maan en de zon mooio hebt gedaan...eerst schijnen dezen, dan gaan ze dr aan...
Mooi gedicht! En Engels ook...poe poe!

Nou is de volgende stap dichten in het engels...

mjah, dichten in het engels ben ik nu aan het proberen http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

wil alleen niet echt lukken :S http://forum.scholieren.com/tongue.gif