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Horror Kitty 02-03-2002 10:18

Parasite and Butterfly
 
Parasite and Butterfly

Two glittery butterflies dance under the moon
Twirling up in a glistening spiral
Sprankling drops of euphoria over the forest
Enlighting eachothers faces with sparkles of hope
A dark dragon flew over and covered the woods in darkness
The butterflies are flying up, escaping the dominating death-shadow

Leaving the dragon to die in it's flames
He's grasping for what he once had
When he finally opened his enchanting eyes
But will he ever open up
So the rotten flower he is can bloom at last
Or will he keep himself safe under the ground
Protected by the warm black soil

No matter how hard a precious butterfly
Can try to resist and erase the image
Never will she be able to completely fade away the past
It leaves it's trace inside her mind, her heart, her soul
A little fire that's feeded in every helpless moment
Slowly destroying everything inside
With knifes of disrespect, glass pieces of despise
Cutting their wings off, making them fall

A puddle of mud is moving, somethings growing underneath
Two blackened butterflies dance under the stars
Twirling up in a blooded spiral
A blot on their soul makes them remind all the scars
A permanent onconscious thought playing with their mind
What if they are nothing and you are everything
Never will anybody see the magic of nothing special

The dragon is slowly burning, rotting for his sins
While there is something else out there
A little parasite, sucking away all blood in those
Who don't seem to care at all
What would it feel like to be tiny and grey
Where did the little bug come from
I can't think while it's buzzing in my ear, just shut up
And let us all die
Cuz isn't that what we live for, so we can die happily ever after?

Tiny bug, just stop buzzing, stop it
I didn't knew that it crawled into my life untill it went away
Then I felt the silence of the emptiness
The hole it left, now I fill it up with happiness
But still I feel it eating me
Butterflies, butterflies
Don't see what just one little parasite can cause



soulless 02-03-2002 23:54

Beetje veel http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif Maar sommige zinnen raken me echt, en dan wordt het weer even een gevoelloos verhaal... Misschien een beetje indampen?

Horror Kitty 03-03-2002 15:01

Jah, hij is best wel lang..
Zal em nog eens overkijken ofzo.

Rhea 03-03-2002 17:47

Ik vind dat lange juist wel wat hebben http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
Die lange zinnen word het wat duidelijker van of zo, meer een 'verhaal' van mooie zinnen.
Ik vinnem mooi.

Nighttime Bird 04-03-2002 09:23

wauw...

kaleidoscope 04-03-2002 10:43

Citaat:

soulless schreef:
Beetje veel http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif Maar sommige zinnen raken me echt, en dan wordt het weer even een gevoelloos verhaal... Misschien een beetje indampen?


Had het niet beter kunnen zeggen.
[toevoeging]Ik vindt de title mooi[/toevoeging]

Horror Kitty 04-03-2002 18:32

Wowie! Thnx allemaal http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
Had em geschreven voor Make Yourself, maar dr comp is kapot http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

Horror Kitty 04-03-2002 18:34

Citaat:

Nighttime Bird schreef:
wauw...
Je moet vaker gedichten posten op DoP, Ewout http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif

Offtopic: Ik ga ff de tourdates van Glassjaw sjekke http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/biggrin.gif

Nighttime Bird 05-03-2002 23:18

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wallflower schreef:
Je moet vaker gedichten posten op DoP, Ewout http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif


dank je...zal ik misschien wel weer eens doen....als ik het durf...
Citaat:

Offtopic: Ik ga ff de tourdates van Glassjaw sjekke http://forum.scholieren.com/wink.gif http://forum.scholieren.com/biggrin.gif
http://forum.scholieren.com/biggrin.gif

Brackish 09-03-2002 12:17

Citaat:

wallflower schreef:
Wowie! Thnx allemaal http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
Had em geschreven voor Make Yourself, maar dr comp is kapot http://forum.scholieren.com/frown.gif

eeyz, (ik iz Make Yourself) meid, echt mooje txt... *is stil*.. pff.. mooj http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

Horror Kitty 09-03-2002 19:30

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Brackish schreef:
eeyz, (ik iz Make Yourself) meid, echt mooje txt... *is stil*.. pff.. mooj http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
allow! dankjewellie http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
eindelijk is je comp weer gemaakt *jeuj*
luf joe


Brackish 09-03-2002 23:37

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wallflower schreef:
allow! dankjewellie http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
eindelijk is je comp weer gemaakt *jeuj*
luf joe


ja whiiih eindelijk http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif
luf joe toe

Snow White 10-03-2002 10:14

lang dat wel, maar op sommige stukken zeer pakkend. liefs Snow

Horror Kitty 10-03-2002 10:24

tenks http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

sas_andrea 10-03-2002 11:06

en dat heb je zelf geschreven??? shit joh! mooi hoor


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