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grammaticaal gezien zal het helemaal niet kloppen maar het drukt mijn gevoelens erg goed uit. http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif

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guess u never thought it would end like this,did u?
guess u never saw it coming, the end, the pain you've always feared.

now u realise that it's my life u live, my air that u breathe,
now u see the trees that i saw, did u saw me enjoy the breeze?

said u couldn't life without me, instead u thought u could,
said u are about to stay with me forever, and i know u would,

for sure i can handle u, but not the situation where we at,
i could whisper u my sweetest joy, my smallest fear,
all that i could unlie to you was already there.

u think i'm crazy, fleeing freely like the birds,
u tell me i'm in love with u, truly hoping it really bad,

after a long bliss, me returning to you,
the fact that i missed u made me sad.
as we walk along the road, together alone,
we walk alone, together...



[Dit bericht is aangepast door sha (10-03-2002).]

ik vind het altijd zo irritant als ik een lap tekst moet gaan lezen. Misschien in strofe verdelen ofzo maakt het aantrekkelijker lezen... Want het is mooi wat je schrijft...

k heb em nu verdeeld in strofes http://forum.scholieren.com/smile.gif