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red_hot_chilli_pieper 08-03-2002 11:42

21 years gone by
 
niet zo een heel goeie maar wel meest recent:

seven years lost and forgotten
seven years good , seven years bad
last been best and worse Ive ever had
day becomes night and shadow turns light
time flies by unpredictable as mankind
I look back at what ive been
I think back of what ive seen
three time seven year have gone by
and I dont want to go yet but they're calling. after all its a beautiful day toe die.

tacidvs 08-03-2002 15:45

Were the years good as well as bad? You really should attend to your interpunction.

the exploding boy 11-03-2002 07:54

wel duidelijk, maar nogal standaard en voorspelbare tekst. (naar mijn idee)


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