Nightly swans
 

Sowillo
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Come and take me away
At your hand
your land of misery

Come and open doors
The first doors
to await ceremony

Breathe deep and feel me shiver
As we are
the well of tears

The drops of dew deep
you're aloft with few asleep

with all your pride you dwell
so breathless steep

No more then you
Like nightly swans
lit by moonlight
Art ever aloft

No more then beauty
Like nightly swans
lit by moonlight
Go down with death

Come and take me away
To the land, where tomorrow's sin
no more then darkness
awaits your eyes

To be filled

With ever grin

thus you spoke
Of divine light
there were pride'll be
The well of blood

Come and take me away
at your hand
Through your land

and we'll be one

Craving sees no daylight
aside my queen'll ride
the days of sun

that now art gone

*stil*

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Come and take me away
At your hand
your land of misery

Come and open doors
The first doors
to await ceremony

&

No more then beauty
Like nightly swans
lit by moonlight
Go down with death

Come and take me away
To the land, where tomorrow's sin
no more then darkness
awaits your eyes

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MAAR:

't geeft me tegelijker tijd een zeer koud gevoel :-s Heb jij ook een koud gevoel? wou je het hierin overbregen ofzo? of ben ik vreemd als ik het koud vind?

( offtopic :spreek ik je weeruhs? *knuffels* (f) !!!!)

Hey thnx iedereen :-)

Nou, het gedicht gaat over de zon en duisternis tegenover elkaar ofzoiets. En ik ben niet al te blij dus dan merk je wel welke kant het opgaat ;-)

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Come and take my stupid ass away
At your sorry hand
your sorry land of misery

Come and open doors
The fucking first doors
to fuckin' await ceremony

Breathe deep and feel my stupid ass shiver
As we are
the fucking well of tears

The fucking drops of dew deep
you're aloft with few asleep

with all your sorry pride you dwell
so god-damn breathless steep

No motherfucking more then, piece of shit, you
Like nightly swans
lit by moonlight
Art ever aloft

No motherfucking more then, piece of shit, beauty
Like nightly swans
lit by moonlight
Go down with death

Come and take my stupid ass away
To the fucking land, where the fuck tomorrow's sin
no motherfucking more then, shit, darkness
awaits your sorry eyes

To fuckin' be filled

With ever grin

thus you and your sluts spoke
Of divine light
there were pride'll be
The fucking well of blood

Come and take my stupid ass away
at your sorry hand
Through your sorry land

and we'll be one

Craving sees no motherfucking daylight
aside my lame queen'll ride
the fucking days of sun

that now art gone


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