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jenny13 30-03-2002 21:22

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Every night I make a wish
I wish for sunshine and rainbows
Hoping for your to show up
To tell me what real love shows

Compassion, Pure Passion and fun
If it includes all this
Then tell why do I want to run?

Run far, far away from here
From everyone who comes close
So they won’t find out my biggest fear
The fear of rejection and being alone

Rejection from me
The ones I like
Because I’m afraid of them
Afraid they won’t like me for who I am

Who I am is that what I’m so afraid of?
My own reflection
Could it be?
Could that be the reason of rejection?

It’s just me
The quiet little girl with a with a heart of gold
But is it true?
Because that’s just what they’re told

Is that the picture people have of me?
A picture of sweetness and once in a while a grin?
Everybody claims to know me
If just anyone KNEW me...


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Christel 30-03-2002 21:34

de boodschap vind ik goed, maar vind de loop wat minder... niet echt spranklin... euhmz, de manier van rijm van woorden trekt me niet zo, maar nogmaals, dat maakt hem niet slecht! vind het laatste stuk vooral mooi

goddezzz 31-03-2002 10:17

moooooooooooooi

Sidhe 31-03-2002 10:52

http://forum.scholieren.com/eek.gif Bjoetifoel


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