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Cinamon 21-10-2002 20:08

Cinderella Tears
 
Try to look at me, and really see my heart
Don't you glance your eyes across the room,
leaving the oppertunity to nerve me...

Cling to our memory, and please remember my part
Don't let your mind slip to any other,
resting me to eternal tears...

My cheeks all red, and black covering my eyes
You weren't there when I needed you,
logical to the soul, still I'm sad...

I told myself I am sick, and no one but me is to blame
You weren't all I expected you to be,
dreams I've kept alive, for the result you being mad...

I felt like I was the world to you
Things couldn't ever be the same without you,
though you were never here...

I felt like you had some kind of deep affection towards me
People make mistakes and I was forever more wrong....

Truth_Hurts 21-10-2002 22:57

Tjonge, ik vind het echt heel mooi :)

Sidhe 22-10-2002 09:20

Ik oook... Wanner hebbu die geschreven? *is jaloers, heeft writersblock*

(y)

Mabo 22-10-2002 14:26

Erg mooi. (y) :) Ikke is onder de indruk!!!

Cinamon 22-10-2002 15:38

Onder de indruk?
Als in: Dat ik het niet kan ofzo?
pfft... thank me for being in love aight?

Doewie!!!!!!
doe inge de greets
ps. ben nie kwaad of zo lufja

Mabo 22-10-2002 15:53

Citaat:

drinks@myplace schreef:
Onder de indruk?
Als in: Dat ik het niet kan ofzo?
pfft... thank me for being in love aight?

Doewie!!!!!!
doe inge de greets
ps. ben nie kwaad of zo lufja

Doet ik...:)
Nee...Tis een erg mooi gedicht juist, well done !
Keep on doin like this ;)

Cinamon 22-10-2002 20:44

Okay dan!
Lief van je :)


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