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Horror Kitty 24-10-2002 22:06

One Winged Angel
 
One-winged Angel

She was nailed to the ground
Her feet blooded like the feet of Jesus
Her tears stayed away
She wished she could cry
But the hurting kept on staying inside
She told me, well at least I'm safe
I've already suffered through hell
So I'm sure I'm done with pain
These drops of blood are the last
This pain is final
I admired her for such strength
When hope left her behind
And dropped her down from the clouds
She broke all she had
And the pieces were never glued back
Cripled she was, only one wing left
But she could still fly
In her head she could still fly
Yeah, she can fly

SpiT 24-10-2002 22:46

Mooi :) vooral 't einde (die 3 zinnetjes) :o

iamre18 25-10-2002 17:15

Citaat:

SpiT schreef:
Mooi :) vooral 't einde (die 3 zinnetjes) :o
Yep, die laatste zinnetjes maken 'm mooi:)

Type 27-10-2002 18:08

mooi gedicht. Ik had alleen van het zinnetje "her feet blooded like the feet of Jezus" gemaakt "Her feet blooded like the feet of Christ"

Je-zus maakt het zinnetje imho NET iets te lang...


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