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Bazz 05-11-2002 01:28

What now to be?
 
The ticking of the clock annoys me.
I'm asking myself "What now to be?"
With little chance with the one I love,
I need all help sent from above.
I don't expect this to come so soon,
It won't blow in my hand at noon.
I have to earn it, and this I have not.
I'm feeling abandonned like it's all a plot.
Once more I have to face the world alone,
Once more I must survive on my own.
I bid you now farewell my angel,
For now I'll face the flames of hell.
With no help from the ones next to me,
I'm asking myself "What now to be?"

Slettelina * 05-11-2002 14:44

mooi(y)

Woodstock 05-11-2002 16:45

complot ---> plot? betekent ongeveer tzelfde en past beter.

best mooi, Engels hier en daar een beetje kreupel, maar wel qua gedicht goed.

QuEeNoFhArTs 05-11-2002 17:26

goed hoor....tja meer kan ik er niet over zegge :confused:

Kez 05-11-2002 20:53

mooi (Y)

Bazz 06-11-2002 22:56

:o


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