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sweetangel19 26-11-2002 12:49

what the fuck is this...
 
What the fuck is this...

What the fuck is this?
never felt this before
my stomach is tingly
as I close the door.

Walk around in circles
all I do is stare
and when the phone rings
I have to gasp for air.

I hope it's you
who else could it be?
why would it be you?
you hardly even know me.

Still I sit and wonder
what this feeling is
A scilent flame burns
and still I think of that kiss.

the candle isn't out by far
this will last long, I bet.
I'm ready for you now
well no...not now...not yet.

Krummeltje 26-11-2002 12:54

Het is wel een leuk gedicht. Niet bijster origineel, maar dat is ook niet nodig.

Krummeltje

sinsere 27-11-2002 16:23

Ik vind het gedicht niet bijzonder, maar je laatste regel is erg leuk :) (y)


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