unsealed doors
 

Unsealed doors

Far beyond unsaid,
where no one really knows.
Where darkness somethimes glows.
It's deep inside my head.

And there in that most secret place,
you're standing by the door.
I'm so afraid to show you more.
Couriosity makes you stay.

And that's where I feel guilty for.
I can't make up my mind.
I've never been open to any before.
But for you their's nothing to hide.

You just mean so much to me
More that someone's ever been.
I'll show you what's behind

(y) (y) (y)

mooiig!!! :)

K vin de 3e strofe niet zo mooi,

maar voor de rest, mooie gedachte achter het gedicht ensow


*kuz*

Bite.

Ik vind het begin best mooi, alleen de laatste alinea vind ik er niet zo goed bij passen..

Hoezo?



Trouwens, ff nog over t gedicht zelf, uhm, in de derde strofe, moet WHERE niet WHAT zijn?