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Joy! 04-01-2003 08:05

I Don't Know
 
I Don’t Know

The feeling of insecurity
Is driving through my head
I don’t know what it is
But is makes me feeling very bad

Is it that I
Can only think of her
Thins that have happened
The things that I don’t dare

This feeling is inside of me
For more than fifteen months
But for this long time
I couldn’t said it once

I have said I a million times
Only in my dreams
And when I get awake
I leave everything behind

It gets harder every time
To see her stand alone
I want to take her in my arms
And then I will get close

I will say her everything
Tell her every thought
Explain how I think of her
And what feeling she had brought

Whit this I hope to realize
Happiness for two
Then I get second thoughts
If this will come true

Shall I lose a friend?
One ore maybe more?
Can I take all these risks?
Is this where I am fighting for?

Morphia 04-01-2003 16:37

Het doet me wel wat, maar ik vind het niet echt goed. Het is wel heel simpel. En er zitten ook een paar taalfoutjes in.

SpiT 04-01-2003 20:06

Zie Morphia.
Ik vind het ook niet geweldig, al heeft het wel iets.


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