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Zezette 10-04-2003 20:30

Mirror mirror...
 
K'heb het op een hele raar moment geschreven en is zeker nie romantisch ofzo...zou wel graag jullie mening :)
(sorry voor de foutjes die er mogelijk in zouden komen)

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
you've got to tell me...all!
You told me I was pretty,
but that was out of pitty.

Now I don't trust you anymore,
because that was all before.
So I asked you: Who's the prettiest of all time?
You told me: It's surrtenly not you, is that a crime?

I let myself fall on the floor,
and hoped that you founded what you've been looking for!
You've hurt my feelings,
never stopped teasing!

I took you off the wall,
and told you you're an asshole.
I put your ass on the floor,
I laught the loudest who had known?!

I trowed you on the street,
and hoped to never have to see...
that ugly face off yours!

mleen 11-04-2003 16:56

na de 1e strofe wordt het ritme minder, het woordgebruik midner

maar hij is okee :)


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