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AnTaRTiCa 08-04-2002 18:44

Give
 
Give me one tear
And let it fall
Give me one smile
Carefree to all
Give me one heart beat
Without a shadow of pain
Give me one drop of blood
Then do it all again.

If everyone spends one different second in the day
Thinking about the emptiness that remains in me
And fills their thoughts with one of kindness
Then it will sustain me
Make me borrow one second of your will
One moment of your time
Let me live one instant in your life
If I do this to enough people
Then it will seem like I have a life
Even if it isn't mine.
So won't you please take the time?

Horror Kitty 08-04-2002 19:00

:eek:

echt heeeewl mooj :)

tacidvs 08-04-2002 21:03

Wat een eng idee, ze is mooi.

Jeremai 08-04-2002 21:41

Prachtig! ...

Nighttime Bird 08-04-2002 22:10

wauw....:eek:

*stilte*.....

.......

AnTaRTiCa 10-04-2002 17:17

oei thnx allemaal :)

bambykill 10-04-2002 18:55

mmmmmmmmm.

ja, ik vind hem ook mooi.
alleen er is iets dat niet helamaal klopt in het tweede stukje.
Maar goed, mijn eigen gedichtjes kloppen soms ook voor geen
meter.

groetjes :)


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