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~Super Cunt

Something
I need to tell you
I think
That you should know
It is just my oppinion
But I think you really..
SUCK!
You know
I really think too much
So bad
It hurts like hell
How could you distort your mouth
To such a shape
That it could produce
Those evil things you say
Your words are like insects
Crawling inside me
I cough them up and I
Just spit them out
IN YOUR FACE!
Roaches crawling over you
I hope they'll eat your flesh
And tell me
Do you even realize
How easy
Bad trash like you
Can catch fire
My hand slowly moves towards
A barril of fuel
Light the fire..
UNTILL IT SWALLOWS YOU!
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mjah..


~Thieve

You can never steal from me
Even though I robbed you from your everything
Keep your hands off of my stuff
It's bad to steal
Only I can
Cause that's my selfish way of life
I'm all alone here
Can't seem to find the light
Where can it be
Oh no, you didn't...
Did you steal it from me
Crawl in the night
Through my window
I throw you outside
It takes more to surprise a
Thieve..

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hmmz..


~Witches

A clear sky tonight
Some strange scent
Spreads around in the air
Endless beaches of white sand
Wicked creatures
Fly out to scare
Glittery eyes big and gazing
Look at the darkened skies
Can you see them fall down
On the beach
Where they're found
Dancing around a big fire
Untill the magic is sucked
Away in a spiral
Again they go to sleep
Waiting for another evening
To awaken when the
Curtain of stars falls down
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vin ze zelf echt bagger :(

nø1.
Kmoest hem meerdere keren lezen, maar bij de laatste keer (zonet) had ik denk ik het ritme en de klemtonen te pakken ;-)
Misschien heel bekrompen, maar ik vind hem meisjesachtig :p, gewoon de manier waarop hij geschreven is, en inhoudelijk vooral. maar das niet negatief, dat mag ik :-)

nø2.
is een mooi omschreven mededeling

nø3.
Voor mijn gevoel zit er net 1 zin teveel in, maar ondanks dat is hij beswel goed

dank u :)

al deel ik uw mening niet :p

wahhh vet wijs meis :) (koels ik rijmennnn :D)
echtwel respect..http://www.forum.scholieren.com/images/icons/icon14.gif

:D thnx