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the patriot 04-10-2003 16:16

War Poem
 
Ik heb een gedicht gemaakt bij Engels, en ik d8 ik post em hier maar ff :D


Take a look trough the window to the sky
Before you jump and die

The Commander lets his whistle blow
Everybody stands up, equipment check and ready to go
Hook up! Open the door
Get ready to jump into war

The light turns from red into green
Jump into something you have never seen
Mg’s rattling, Flak exploding
Planes crashing… let the great crusade begin!

Fall into some serious deep shit
Get yourself together! There’s no time for fear or to sit!

Still waiting to hit the ground, beeying hunted by 88’s
Trying not to be hit by shrapnels

The men are scattered all over the drop zone
No one knows where he is
Grab your Garand and get into business!

MG 42’s and submachine guns begin to roar
Now it’s time to meet the horror of war

Waiting for the darkness, to cover all around
Carefully pick your time to move on the ground

Carefully moving forward, slowly on the run
Waiting for the sight of a loaded gun

Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
You have got to kill, to stay alive

Regroup the following morning
Then let the hunt on the 88’s begin

Pushing forward to the battery
Rifling down the enemy

Saving the Rangers by blowing up the guns
Risking their lives
For saving the battle which has to be won
Dying on the altar of freedom…

lovetear 07-10-2003 14:56

Sommige regels vind ik wel erg lang, daar struikel ik een beetje over. Verder loopt het goed.

Escapism 07-10-2003 16:19

geinspireert door metallica?

doet me nogal denken aan bijvoorbeeld 'for whom the bell tolls'


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